Synonyms of revision in English:

emendation, correction, alteration, changing, adaptation, editing, copy-editing, rewriting, redrafting, recasting, rephrasing, reworking, updating, revamping

version, corrected version, edition, rewrite, reworking

variant, form, update, reading, rendition, adaptation

reconsideration, review, re-examination, reassessment, re-evaluation, reappraisal, rethinking, rethink, thinking over

change, alteration, modification

rereading, studying, memorizing, cramming

British informal swotting